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Author:	nita	Submitted:	11th June, 2004	Favourites:	0
Genre:	Adventure	Downloads:	151
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Edited By nita on 6/11/2004

Ummmm...., this is my first demo of my first game and it is about a puppy named belle that takes revenge against her brother, baxter.The first pic is the evil one herself and her enemy in the background.The second pic is where the dog catcher catches belle.This game has major improvments from my pilot game.I am 10 years old and i hope to be better than my brother zimtower.Have fun!

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http://www.sitesled.com/members/zimtower/puppyrev..zip (179kb )

Posted by nita

11th June, 2004

dont call her a cute puppy cause she is pure evil

Posted by vortex2

11th June, 2004

Well it isnt bad for a first game but there are a few things that could be improved :). Starting with the title screen. Try to avoid using the string object :P, it just doesnt look that great. If there is anyway you could like draw a title screen and your own letters or something it might look a bit better ^_^. Also make space anykey :P. The story: Grey background, yellow text... It just doesnt look that great :P. Mabey have a scrolling story and a dog in the background, or something :P. (Basically try to be creative). In Game: The platform engine could use a bit of work, I dont know if you use the default one or not, but the fact that you can run through walls isnt very fun :(. I do like how the balls bounce around though :). Also, try to add a condition to stop you when you leave the play area ;). If its possible, a climbing animation for the dog might look a bit better on ladders, and perhaps a diffrent walking animation? but its up to you ;). Also that sign , the buildings... they need a bit of work :P. Not bad for a 10 year old ^_^ keep trying.

Posted by Rhys D

12th June, 2004

Eugh, attack of the emoticons.

Posted by ChrisB

12th June, 2004

Calm down Phizzy, the doctors aren't here to hurt you. They're just going to give you anaesthetic to make you sleepy. *syringes a large air bubble into his blood*

Posted by Retired Kliker Lazarus

12th June, 2004

Nothing like sibiling wars....

Posted by Retired Kliker Lazarus

12th June, 2004

Hey, did you just steal your brothers graphics?! :P Actually, this was very good for a 10 year old. I like the concept. But, as mentioned by Vortex, give this a platform engine, and some better graphics. :) Good luck!

Posted by Warren

13th June, 2004

honestly, i think this game is hilarious and captures the je-ne-sais-quoi of the early K&P titles. you've gotta admit, the stroll through 'barton' was an interesting experience.

Posted by Muggus

14th June, 2004

Ah this reminds of the good old days when I was a 10 year old girl making games...oh wait. Either way...thumbs up! Good effort...hope to see the game fully made. :D

Posted by

14th June, 2004

this game was hilarious! But gameplay wise, it wasnt that good.Much better than any of zim towers ant revenge bull shit games.

Posted by

14th June, 2004

if shes 10 then how old are you? You seem like youre six for some odd reason.

Posted by Retired Kliker Lazarus

16th June, 2004

Then what's with "why should i tell u" in your profile? :P

Posted by awesomeanimator

18th June, 2004