The face is okay, but her arms and the gun and all that look just awkward IMO.
Hm, and it's terribly unoriginal. It's just like any other manga-style character I've seen. It's always good to make your main character a bit more special, to make it more unique, and memorable.
Thanks for your feedbacks guys, really appreciated your comments and opinons.
Personally I thought in most spy novels is not the image of the spy that is unique, but what they do is Unique .
Take 007 for example, I mean he's probably look like just another bloke off the street. Who actually knows that he blow up Russian nuclear submarines and doom lasers?
Considering the time that must have taken I'm almost forced to like it I do love the eyes, though I think it's a bit too rough in places and the arms look a bit out of place somehow..
Gd work though on the whole
Oh, and
Rules (in fact) say Dogzer mustn't inflict imaginary rules on Vincey, and that Vince should like the eyes at least!